Saturday, May 28, 2011

The armory - 160

Dreams swirl.
Sleep escapes me
as another comment
meant to sting
digs deeply
into my very soul.

It was meant to drive a wedge
so wedge it is.
Mine has barbs on the end.


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The one-and-only Monkey Man plays this game every Sunday.
Write a story in 160 characters, including spaces. No more, no less.
Play along, if you dare - but be warned... the depth of emotions can be felt
even in such small places.

6 comments:

Brian Miller said...

yikes. the tongue is the sharpest of swords...

mine will be up around midnite...

G-Man said...

I'll just shut up!

Loved your 160 PG

Have a great week....G

Possum said...

Wow...or should I say Ouch.
Excellent!

Jingle said...

lovely 160.
beautiful words to chew on
bless your weekend.

Chef Kar said...

A barbed tongue is nothing to be played gently with. Powerful. Telling.

Here's mine: The Visit

Evelyn said...

"so wedge it is"
fabulous!
bad ass...