Too many hours passed
waiting for him to come home
from the treacherous life at sea.
She waited and watched,
pacing effortlessly on the balcony
for hours at a time.
Every ship might hold her love
and yet she feared he’d never return.
Inside the room, a voice.
“Honey – who’s that out on the patio?”
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22 comments:
Ooooo, I love this spooky goodness. Gave me shivers.
Love the accompanying eerie photo ~ spooky.
Here's mine: Friday Flash 55 ~ Daytime Mask
ooo...deliciously creepy....i like it...
Sometimes its hard to tell who's the ghost.
Rachel....?
You are in this Dark Mode as well.
I Love it!
Too much Lovey Dovey shit I say!!
Thanks for playing, Thanks for supporting others as well, I've been seeing you about, and please have a Kick Ass Week-End....G
Whoaa. Its scary. And the picture completes it all.
total creep out here....goosebumps and all.
would love to see the next scene of this one...
So sad when we don't accept what is and move on.
Loved it! Lovely and eerie!
Spooky 55, I love it!
Oh, this reminds me of how much I loved ghost stories when I was a little kid. Soooo goood!
Ghost stories - not just for Halloween anymore! :)
ha! I love the punch line; thank you for the creepy smile on this one ~
Love the creepiness of this FF55 & the photo helps set the mood. nicely written
joanny
How many times can we say spooky. Spooky indeed.
This is awesome! We love going on "ghost tours" when we travel around and this really fits right in with what we hear. Never have encountered. Just a wonderful write!
Ooooh,it scared me..!
Well written 55F!
keep writing:)
That's stunning. I really never saw that coming! Excellent 55!
Creeps... chills...!!
A very spooky 55.. loved it absolutely..
I don't wanna know who's on the patio.. I'm leaving already!
weekend hugs xoxox
These are a few of my favorite things -- ghosts and monkeys:) (You got an aside comment on my post today)
How did I miss this one?
I love how you build up the spookiness and then give us a good jump at the end.
I like your style.
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